A great review from Stan Weisleder: I just completed your script Secrets Kept and I wanted to get back to you. A lot of people send me their stuff and I read whatever is sent to me and I have to tell you that much of it is such crap that it is a waste of paper that it is printed on. For what it is worth I think that you have a winner here. At a few points in the story I even got choked up with emotion. It has been a long time since we had a good story involving ghosts, especially one that is also a love story. At one time there was a rash of them in the 50s and 60s. The last good one that I can recall is The Ghost and Mrs. Muir. I dont consider Ghostbusters as even resembling a good story in that genre. Your story is well paced with the only conclusion that was possible. I must point out though that there are what appear to be a number of minor mistakes in English or the wrong punctuation mark. With your permission I would like to review your story with the objective to offer my suggestions on cleaning up the English. I believe this would make your script look as though it was professionally edited which could only have a positive effect on prospective investors. Of course you could pick and choose among my suggestion or ignore them completely. Sent from my iPad
Posted on: Fri, 02 Jan 2015 03:18:51 +0000
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