So for my creative writing seminar today, I decided to submit some - TopicsExpress

So for my creative writing seminar today, I decided to submit some work for the class to look over and critique. They looked over my alternative love story Lip Ring and gave me some very good feedback. They said that I had very good details and some strong descriptions and it was quite personal, but I may have introduced the conflict too early and there may have been quite a few narratives, which all could have been written as separate stories. They also said that I should have expanded some of the characters and given them more of a backstory. So a lot of mixed, but helpful feedback. a.storywrite/story/9999639-Lip_Ring-by-lonelywolf457

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