Dear Reader, Doing some major surgery on Egyptian Demise, moving scenes around. I realized Trevor and Dalia were largely absent from the book during some of the protest scenes, like for two or three days they were nowhere to be found. So I decided I could move a dinner scene from the chapter I was working on (Sunday) to several chapters later (Wednesday). However, there were several scenes that were connected to that dinner scene, so all of those scenes had to be moved as well, and inserted between other established chapters, where they might fit. All really complicated to work out because I have to consider chronology and mood. Also had to re-write the scene a bit, because in the first draft they go to dinner that night, now theyre only planning on dinner that Wednesday. So now their schedule is entirely clear from Sunday to Wednesday - what I used to have them doing in that time wont work now, because.... yeah.... Its complicated. Hence, major surgery. Sincerely, The Surgeon.
Posted on: Sun, 06 Jul 2014 00:56:30 +0000
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