Dear The Times of India, I oppose to few phrases used in this article, which in my opinion is in bad taste: 1. Bengals dismal job scenario is not what let him commit suicide. It is his inability to endure pressure or failure. 2. ever fewer companies are bothering to visit the state -> Correct, the avenues for him to go for further studies or for starting up had closed. Oh yes, all other students of other colleges are committing suicide. Correct. I am a ghost writing to you today. 3. bothering to visit the state are you sure, you want to use this phrase? You found no better way to put it ? 4. I dont know how this piece of information helps the readers - Admitted in the sports quota. Oh yes, I would not like to speak my mind here. 5. Thank you for writing Several IT firms with strong presence in Bengal were scheduled to visit our campus later, but it only comes later. An average reader, reads the first paragraph, forms a negative image of the state and leaves your page. Trust me, we can write better articles for you. This does not suit the taste of educated and positive Bengal readers. I might commit suicide out of frustration now. PS: I am not insensitive. The reporter is. Thank you.
Posted on: Wed, 06 Aug 2014 05:13:22 +0000
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