I am writing a story which is a blend of Mahabharata and Ramayan. But I am suffering from writers block. I need some help. Anyway, the story is this. Dhritarashtra is the blind ruler of Ayodhya. His queen is an unscrupulous woman called Kaikai. Kaikai has many sons but her favorite is Duryodhan. Duryodhan ever so often threatens to rape and molest not only Draupadi but also Sita, Gita, Nita and Parineeta (extra characters for the sake of the story). Ayodhya is full of Kauravas who verbally abuse all these women and threaten them. Kaikai does not say a word against her wretched sons. She snores most of the time when she is not busy because her brother Kumbhakarna told her so. She wakes up once in a while to give a pat on the back of Duryodhan and goes back to sleep. Dhritarashtras dilemma is that although he is the king of Ayodhya, he is rather helpless in front of Kaikai because Kaikai has given him a lot of sons. Dhritarashtra does whatever Kaikai says to him. It is not that Kaikai is Urvashi that Dhritarashtra is so enamored by her but Dhritarashtra is so damn blind that he cant even see that Kaikai is a terrible woman. Oneday, Duryodhan crosses limit and threatens to rape all the women in Ayodhya. This makes Ram feel real bad. By the way, Ram is also the son of the blind king but he was born out of wedlock due to which he was not allowed to enter Ayodhya. He complains to Dhritarashtra. Dhritarashtra says, Agar na main hota andha to Kaikai kya karti ye dhanda? Kehti mere sau bacche hai, sab ke sab hi acche hain Tum najaiz ho bhul gaye? Uske to sare jaiz hain Ram was perplexed by the double standard by the ruler of Ayodhya. Duryodhan heard this and increased his venom against Pandavas. Come on, there has to be Pandavas. Mahayan cannot be complete without Pandavas. Partha was most disturbed by this news in Ayodhya. He remembered that once Krishna said to him casually, Partha, G*nd uthao. But Partha interpreted it as Partha, Gandiv uthao. Meanwhile Duryodhan and his brother were mocking Pandavas for being so spineless. This was culminating into a big conflict. This prompted Dhritarashtra wonder to what was happening, He exalted repeatedly, Bhai, kuch batao ye kya ho raha hai. Sanjay, Please radio chalu karo. Why? Cant there be radio during the time of Mahayan? Those fellows even had TV, Nuclear Bomb, Airbus A380, Plastic Surgery and Genetic Science. Come on they used to listen to 98.3 Radio Mirchi. Anyway they changed the channel and came to know what was happening around, He said to Duryodhan, Beta tum se na ho payega. This irked Kaikai. She said, Agar ye ek gaya to wo sarey bhi jayenge Maine sau sau putra diya, Jo chahey karwayenge This is where I am hitting the wall. Help me in advancing the story. Mates, give me some idea. Cheers :)
Posted on: Sat, 13 Dec 2014 13:01:27 +0000
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