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I really want to write a creepy pasta story, so I have the idea written all out for it. I dont write much stories so please bear with me on the rough draft. You guys can add on, rewrite, or give tips on what I should do to improve it. Just please dont copy and take credit without permission. Thank you for reading :) A sleeping soul: Alright, so Im home alone right now. Its just me and my dog. My mom and her bf are out shopping and my sister is at her dads house. Im sitting in the living room, watching t.v. My pup is sleeping, when suddenly his head jerks upward to face the hallway that leads to everyones bedrooms. He starts growling (which is unusual for him since he is such a wuss) and gets up from my lap to stand by the gate that closes off the hallway. He continues growling, which at one point begins to sound deeper, unlike a dogs growl... But more like a beast. At this point Im freaking out, scared to look down the hallway to see what he is growling at... When he suddenly stops. He just states into the hallway, until he whimpers and turns around to run by the door. He wants to get outside, clawing at the back door. As I walk past the hallway to reach the backdoor, I see from the corner of my eye... A dark figure on its hands and knees crawl from my moms room into mine. I know Im stupid for doing so... But I walk down the hallway to see whats in my room. As I near the door, I again hear the beast like growl. And as soon as I reach my bedroom the door slams in my face. And the whispers begin. It will watch you while you sleep Its dark cold eyes will make you weep Once its in, it wont come out Until youre dead and another comes about So rest your head and count your sheep Your soul is now for it to keep I keep hearing the bodiless voices repeat the chant until my ears go numb. Then my door opens. My room is so cold... And my blankets and pillows are thrown everywhere. And in a black goop, which smells like a rotting corpse... Spells out the words sweet dreams on my walls.
Posted on: Sat, 12 Jul 2014 17:53:15 +0000

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