I wrote the first few chapters of my fanfic with by BFF and she - TopicsExpress



          

I wrote the first few chapters of my fanfic with by BFF and she wrote the chapters for her character Ochita hope you like The quest by Ezra and Kaylien ( Its a beautiful day in Equestria the sun was shining and not a cloud in the sky but not all was well. In raritys boutique a great distress is in the air as princess Celestia, princess Luna, princess Twilight sparkle and the rest of the main six are in a deep conversation. Its impossible after all these years.” says Twilight. “I believe it is so.” says Luna ” the prophecy was fulfilled centuries ago it just cant be. “stammers twilight “we all know what must be done collect the newborns take them to the castle Its the only safe place for them by our side. orders Celestia . -10 years latter-WAKE UP screams Ochita uhhh what time is it I moan loudly time for you too get up were going to miss the exams and you dont Evan have your books reddy ok Im coming I yell as I get up and canter down the hallway to the shower room geez I think Ochita was freaking out why do Phillys have to be so dramatic, I hope I pass this test tho its the final exam and ever since I was a foal I remember Ive lived in the princesss castle training for something with Ochita, I dont remember my family at all suddenly a loud rasp at the door startles me I yell Im almost done ok hurry up tho were going to miss it yells Ochita I finish washing my wings and dry off I canter back to my bedroom collect my books and pencils and spring to the throne room where celestia,luna,twighlight, and Ochita await my arrival my heart thumps loudly as I step In. I stand waiting for Anatoly, I whisper for him to hurry up which he does. Once both him and I are in front of all three princesses they begin their mini speech. “We all know you are worried and afraid about taking this exam, ”Celestia spoke followed be Luna. “But you need not to we have faith in you and you will to just fine.” “You’ll do great I did this same thing when I was a philly don’t worry you do great.” Twilight Sparkle ended. But even though their kind words were meant to help it just made me even more worried and now slightly frightened. I thought to myself. “What’s going to happen if I fail, will they be displeased? Will they hate me? I’ve studied all my life…it’s all I’ve ever known…what if I fail them.” I began to worry more and more as the three princess’ led us to the exam room. Once in the exam room we are split into two different rooms twighlight hands me a paper and leaves the room after a nod of good luck I get down to the test #1.if you and your pony friends were surrounded by a full grown dragon and it lunged at your least Favorite pony you would A.jump in the way to sacrifice yourself in his/her place B.cast a magic spell to slow it down and hope she/he gets away C.let the dragon kill she/he while you and the rest of your friends get away This is verry hard I think I dont Evan know magic how do they expect me to answer this? Fine c. because saving the rest of then ponys matters most and if I sacrifice myself the ponys are lost without a leader next question #2.which one is more important than the rest? A.speed B.smarts C.fassion D.strength Fpassion A.duh speed is the most awesome and fashion who would answer that? #3.your falling off a cliff you A.cast a levitation spell B.use your wings in the reverse ap format C.cast a net spell D.use your wings in the pa format Oh crap I forget which ap was and pa was uh um I think as I concentrate hard ok d. best gusse I hope ochitas doing better ok on to the next one #4.why is it important to understand the concept of flying evan if you dont fly yourself? A.battle patterns B.so you can understand how wind flows C.understand history of flying D.all of the above D. too easy I know all this because I fly duh #5.what other ponys can become alicorns besides unicorns? A.normal ponys B.pegisis ponys C.all of the above although its rare Oh crap i dont know I never paid attention to theses lessons um C. #7.Nightmare moon was created by… A-Hate B-carelessness C-Jealousy d-A and C D. Duh who wouldent get that right? 1. What is the power of the changelings? A-change into any pony B-Steal the love from others C-both I have no idea uh a.? 2. What does discord create? A- Hate B-love C-kindness D-Chaos A. I hate him so much 3. There are __ elements of harmony. A-5 B-6 C-7 B. I think 2. When with friends you single a new pony out False unless there not cool enough 3.When a pony is in trouble you help them True duh 4.Never use what you have for wrong reasons True unless it makes your 20% cooler 5. Nightmare Moon returned on the 1,000th summer solstice Um I think as I start to panic uh true whispers a voice in my head um true? Phew almost done this was easy too easy....Essay q- What is the history and tale of nightmare moon? What is the history of Discord? Why was Nightmare Moon created? And what does discord create? Oh boy I just cursed myself I think dreadfully oh princess if I pass this test Ill never not pay attention to your teachings I swear. Ok nightmare moon was created with jealousy and hate against her sister she became evail tried to destroy her sister but failed and was banished to the moon and than I forgot the rest. Discord crests hate and chaos wherever he gos gosh I hate him. I feel so good after I set the pencil down I hope Ochita did well too as I exit the test room and hand my paper to twighlight to see my fate she nods Im approval I must have passed yay I think as I Follow her out to meet up with Ochita. I walked to my exam room following Princess Luna once I entered at sat at my desk and started as soon as Luna left. I looked at the test and read it to myself. “What is the power of the changelings?...A. Change into any pony, Steal love from other or C. both…Well I’m gonna go with C.”I use my magic and pick up a quill and circle the letter ‘C’. ”Number two. What does Discord create? Easy, D. Chaos. Three…there are blank elements of harmony. There are six so B…Wow so far this is easy…Four If your pony friends were surrounded by a full grown dragon and it lunged at your least favorite pony would you A. jump in the way to sacrifice yourself in his/her place, B. cast a magic spell to slow it down and hope she/her gets away, C. let the dragon kill he/she while you and the rest of your friends get away. I would never do that! But I’m torn between A and B…I’ll go B. Okay number five…which is more important than the rest? A. speed B. Smarts C. Fashion D. strength or F. compassion. Totally F.”I circle all of the answers I believe correct. “Six, you are falling off a cliff you A. Cast a levitation spell B. Use your…don’t have any. C. cast a net spell and D. is irrelevant to me. So the answer is A. Seven Nightmare moon was created by, hate, carelessness...no ,jealousy ,or both A and C. Both A and C. Eight what other ponies can become alicorns besides unicorns? Normal,Pegasus or all…hmmm…all although it’s rare.Okay half way Ochita…Number nine why is it important to understand the concept of flying even if you don’t fly?battle patterns,understand winds flows,history or all of the above…D all of the above.”I took a moment to rest and I set my quill down.I then star again finishing th five true or false questions and the essay question.I get up from my desk once I finish and hand my test to Princess Luna.She quickly looked over my test. “Great job Ochita you exceeded.” “REALLY!”I jumped up excited.Luna chuckled. “Follow me.”She lead me to a room and I met up with Anatoly.
Posted on: Fri, 29 Nov 2013 06:51:04 +0000

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