So the editing is going well. I am enjoying the story as much as I - TopicsExpress

So the editing is going well. I am enjoying the story as much as I am the polishing of it. I think I have a rousing tale here. It is of course, chockfull of Lesbian love scenes, for I first wrote it with romance in mind. The story however has just gotten better and better. I am up to chapter twenty right now and had to go through and do some revision because I had gotten character continuity out of whack in one part. Since it has been over a year or two since I wrote the thing it means I might miss some other such problems, so another editing go may need to be done before I start shopping it around for a publisher. It is enough a fantasy tale that it might have legs with the mainstream, though with the love scenes it might squig some people out. Oh well, if they do then they just need to get over it. A large part of the story is about love and how it can develop, even into a three way love affair. Love has its own mind and it will do what it is able to show itself.