Still going to edit it but please comment and tell me what you guys think of my poem 10 seconds till sunrise Another sleepless night, overwhelmed by the night times opera, dazzled by the celestial light show above.. How magnificent it would be to visit our sea of stars to stare at our heavenly forests below... My mind sets a drift, while Im lost at sea, attempting to get distant from this life I currently see... my polluted mind anchored to this world we call free but here we stand governed, restraint by greed... I wish this world was rid of me and we, since all we do is create society to breath, destruction to live, and death to coexist. I refuse to promote this life we supposedly live, because its not us whos suffering but our mother nature and her bliss.. I lay here setting my dreams a drift into the sea above to be guided by the lighthouse of gods.. so beautiful in its glory, pristine in every moment, its light shines upon us at risk of human greed, malicious dreams of settlement and pointless proceed.. We cant even save our earth let alone our moon, I say let it be and take me instead, if it meant setting her free... shes my diary, my counselor in harsh moments, my mentor in perseverance, my cure in every heart breaking moment... Oh the night time how it sets my mind free, I cant even contemplate 7.1 billion minds of greed, its sad how we take this moment for granted when we should be planting trees, filtering our oceans and setting this world free from human delusions. The night time opera comes to a sudden silence, only to prepare for the daybreak harmony .. its a bitter sweat happiness my peaceful darkness is fading, I hope these humans sleeping realize this earth is ending... I lay here gazing watching the golden star as it wakens, hoping and wishing today might be the day of reckoning.... 10 - 9 - 8- The darkness becomes white as the humans awaken these next few seconds might be the most precious, 7 - 6 - 5 - only seconds left till she shines upon us.. what a beautiful night, what a beautiful day break no signs of hate only peaceful intake the sky will soon be golden I promise it will only be seconds.... 4 - 3 - This is the moment we all should praise for, a day with Earth to watch a morning of sunrise .... 2 - 1 -, best time Ive ever spent, watching these 10 seconds till sunrise....... priceless. ... My tribute to My Earth; By: Me
Posted on: Wed, 13 Aug 2014 19:54:48 +0000