Tagged by the lovely Suzanna Ross in the sevens game. The rules = select the first full para or 7 lines of dialogue from p7, p70 or p170 of your WIP and share, then nominate 7 other writers. This is from my current, untitled WIP. Rachel, having just moved in to a dilapidated, country cottage is surprised by a visitor ... ‘Mr. Foster was right. You do need me.’ Rachel stared at him. Her first impression was of gold and brown. He had longish hair burnished treacle by the sun and tied back in an untidy ponytail. He was tall and lean with smoothly tanned skin and she thought he was probably in his early twenties. He smiled and showed even white teeth. ‘Always said this place had the best view in the village. You could put up with a lot for that.’ He nodded to the stunning panorama behind them and held out a long fingered, capable looking hand. ‘I’m Gabe Llewellyn. Mr. Foster said you might be needing my services.’ His voice had the rolling vowels of the country and was deep and humorous. I tag Margaret James, Christina Courtenay, Sue Moorcroft, Victoria Connelly, Mandy Baggot, Juliet Greenwood, Lynda Dunwell.
Posted on: Thu, 25 Jul 2013 21:20:43 +0000
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