Your criticism is very welcome Any structure or word choice changes? Fast Poem I will deep fry this poem in the brown depths of this overused sunflower oil until its crunchy. I will put enough salt on it for you not to taste any of its chemically distorted ingredients. I will wrap it with colorful paper and add Disney character toys for it to appeal to your child. And of course, I will give you the tempting option to upsize to quantities that would comprise of enough calories to heat up The North Pole. And I will advertise: I will replicate this poem, print it on walls, squeeze it into promotion boxes. I will make sure to market it as a healthy choice by adding some greens. Better so, I will pay the fittest of people to do it, so that it seems that my poem is a legitimate sponsor of the World Cup. My poem will get your blood pressure up, just like falling in love does. It will increase the size of your love handles until your pants can no longer handle them. It will saturate you with sweetness that only insulin can regulate. So stand in line, because you shall not wait! Mass produced for your convenience. Designed for those who are always late! My fast poem will not weigh on your wallet. It will only permeate your body like cancer cells and keep telling you that you are lovin it.
Posted on: Fri, 27 Jun 2014 16:47:33 +0000
Trending Topics
Recently Viewed Topics
© 2015