( A note from my instructor, Im so proud of me) Hi there Sabrina -- for this paper, I needed to see that you could incorporate research and then tell me how what you learned compares to your life circumstances with respect to achieving success, the importance of education, the strategies/tips/ideas that you can or have applied from their story, and finally how what you learned motivated you to succeed. It was important for me to capture from your writing the sense that this person was selected FOR A REASON, and that you could somehow identify your life with theirs. It was also important that your writing was college level....robust thinking, correct usage of language and mechanics...clear thoughts and transitions, etc. It seems like you were able to glean important insights from the research of your person and that you were inspired. I hope you will take what you learned with you about this person, and hopefully APPLY some of these strategies and lessons learned on your journey of learning and success. Thank you for working hard on this. You did an outstanding job. Keep up the good work. Instructor Alma Rodriguez
Posted on: Wed, 08 Oct 2014 04:09:48 +0000
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