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A story I am currently working on. What do yall think? Its sad right now but it will get better/happier as I go on. All i could hear was the sirens and the engine roaring; raceing down the road. The beeping of the monitor, drips from the iv. I could hear the medics yelling the driver to hurry up, That I was in critical condition. Darkness was slowly blurring my vision.y limbs were going numb. Just as the darkness time over we pulled in to the hospital parking lot and I was being rushed inside. ****************************************** ..FLASH BACK.. I was driving to the story to pick up somethings before I went over to my girlfriends house. I had my music blaring listening to she keeps me warm. I was singing along and jamming out. I reached down to grab my soda. In the split second my life changed. I didnt see that the truck wanted to speed through the red light thats when a 4x4 truck hit my rear. Causing me to spin and hit another car, Fliping my small camaro. All you could hear was metal on metal. The scraping of cars on the cement. The cracks of bones. The hollars of the drivers. Screams of on watchers. My head flung forward and smashed on the steering wheel. The top of the car was bent down. My door was turned inward trapping my legs and left arm. I was in and out of conscienceness. I glanced up and seen a motorcycle trying to swerve and miss me. But he was to late and tan right in to the passenger door. I flung my right arm up to cover my face from the flying glass and parts. Pecices of glass went into my arm. I screamed in pain. Then I heard sirens. Praying the would hurry up. A fire truck came and then police and ambulances came. The firefighters came over to my car. We will get her out! Go check the motorcyclist to see is he is okay! The firefighter yelled to the medic. I glanced up to see the blurry face of the guy. Violet?! The guy yelled. His voice sounded like my brothers. I groaned and that made him rush the my door closer. The tryed to pull it open. Although the door was crushed in on me. He cursed and then tell for the jaws of life. Another guy rushed over with them. Getting the wedged in they slowly started to open my door. I. screamed in pain as is was lifted off my leg. Showing how badly my leg and arm really was. My brother hollerd for medic. One rushed over with a stretcher and then another came over. They reached in and unblucked my seat belt. Then reaching up they carefully brought me out. I goraned in pain. Tears stinging my cuts on my cheeks. My brother followed me to the ambulance. Im going to call mom and dad to let them know. Ill meet you at the hospital. I tried to nod. C-c-call h-h-hope I stumbled over my words. He noded and rushed to the firetruck on the obine already.
Posted on: Sat, 16 Aug 2014 04:44:33 +0000

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