I think this is probably one of my deeper poems with many hidden meanings and layers, I love writing things like this, I love showing these sides to me and expressing my thoughts in these ways. I hope someone takes something from it thanks) COMATOSE DREAMS BY LEE GILMOUR He stood unseen like the doubts in his mind Reaching out with hopeful fingers to the things he left behind Worrys stab like knife wounds into his tender heart His prayers they raise above the roof begging to restart His smile in place, the mask in check, he hid in daily disguise if only they could see the truth behind his blackened eyes In this palace where nothing really was ever as it seems He lived in ruins in the confines of everyone elses broken dreams She like him woke each day and felt the need to hide A smile in place, and eyes like gems for the nothing growing inside And days would pass and lies would fall like salted tears upon her cushion And all those who tried to break her walls she held back with constant pushing She dreamed to dance and spin and twirl and take flight like a white dove She dreamed of those who had past on now and had been taken from the man above She would re live each moment, like an inferno in her mind The mistakes she made, the things she said, the worries never left her side But even the comatose Never dance alone. and everyone deserves someone take them home a shattered mirror still holds glimmer of a reflection look behind the glass and seek beautys true protection
Posted on: Sun, 19 Jan 2014 23:59:47 +0000
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