Need some opinions, please. How does this sound for a back cover blurb? After three months away at school, Emily Sue Phillips returns to Sunset expecting to resume her relationship with Benjamin Brooks. The two have been sweet on each other since childhood. Instead, she discovers that Ben has left the J Bar K ranch and moved on. He claims to be “too busy” to spend time with her. When she calls on him at the horse farm where he now works and she meets dark-haired Della White, Emily quickly figures out what’s keeping him busy. Ben doesn’t like lying to Emily, but it’s for her own good. Trouble is lurking around him and the Henderson Horse Farm, and the only way to ensure Emily’s safety is to keep her far away. A ruthless murderer who’s been set free, an outlaw’s illegitimate daughter, and buried gold said to be worth thousands… can Ben protect Emily when she puts herself in the middle of it all? OK...REVISED LAST PARAGRAPH. A ruthless murderer who’s been set free, an outlaw’s illegitimate daughter, and buried gold said to be worth thousands… can Ben protect Emily? Or will her snooping lead to disastrous consequences? OR... ...can Ben protect Emily? Or will her snooping lead to disastrous consequences for both of them?
Posted on: Mon, 03 Nov 2014 11:26:26 +0000
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