Okay here you have a part. Hope you like it and feel free to give me some ideas. Oh and comment which scene you liked more. xD Jace looked over the portal he had made to Avalon as he was kneeling down to the ground. This would be the time he would finally kill him. That was his promise to his father. That was his goal from a small kid. His training was to do accomplish this. He would make his father happy to do this. They would finally take over “heaven”. His father is the ruler of the underworld and for billions of years he had been trying to take over both Avalon and earth. He had an affair with an Angel though and that it’s how Jace was brought to this word. He was half demon half Angel. But only he and his father knew this. His father took advantage of Jace’s powers in order to defeat God. Jace knew this very well. He didn’t mind though. He himself wanted revenge on God. He had made his mother disappear in another dimension for punishment for having an affair with the enemy. He gritted his teeth and looked straight ahead to the portal that moved in slow circles to Avalon. He could see the peacefulness of the clear sky, the tall elegant buildings, and the clear blue sea. He used to live there too for a while when his father was still not against God and they were the two powerful angels of Avalon. He had also met a beautiful girl with red hair and grey eyes. He had never asked her name but they would talk for hours and practice in fighting, and honestly he did like her. A lot, but this had nothing to do with what he was trying to do. He would still kill God and she shouldn’t get on his way. He got up on his feet and squared his shoulders. He stepped forward to the portal and vanished to Avalon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ He had his eyes closed during the process of the trip and as soon as he smelled the sea he opened his eyes. He was in Avalon at last. The breeze slightly made his hair cover his dark brown eyes as they turned black. He released his wings slowly from his back. They spread out three times as big as his body. He flapped them once balancing himself on the sky. “Kyogrin.” He said and two enormous swords appeared on his hands. He looked up at the sky with his dark eyes and vanished inside the palace of God. Once he appeared every single angel in the room seemed startled only the angel standing before him was emotionless staring at him with her cold grey eyes. She was tall but still not as tall as himself and her clothing was a light white dress. Her body structure didn’t seem that delicate but she was still much less strong looking than Jace. Her hair was long till her waist and with a scarlet colour. A light breeze brought her bangs to cover one of her eyes. “What are you doing here?” Her voice was steady and serious. She didn’t seem like a normal angel, Jace thought. She would have acted as the rest, shocked if she was. She knew about his existence and she felt him being around so she might be…. No, he thought. Most of them were exterminated by demons billions of years ago. Now only soldier angels lingered around to protect God. If she is what he thinks she is he was going to have trouble. He slightly smiled at her and brought his swords up. “I am just passing through, my lady.” As he spoke air around him rose and made her hair move again. He looked at her more in detail and widen his eyes in shock and his lips parted. He hadn’t noticed but she was elegant… And more beautiful than what he had ever seen. Her hair colour made contrast with her pale skin, and her eyes were big with long eyelashes. He blinked and looked at her eyes trying to stop his mind from doing anything stupid. She took a step forward and she shined as bright as a star. His eyes went wider. “This is………” He mumbled. Her eyes were closed as the light faded away. She was wearing a golden armor and had her cream white wings spread out. An Archangel, he thought. She opened her eyes and a giant sword appeared on her hand. “Excalibur.” Once she said that word a strong wind hit him on the ground. “Gah!” He grimaced and held his chest. He was lightly bleeding and after three seconds the wound closed. An unexplained anger rushed through him. He stood up again and launched towards her clashing one of his swords with hers. She moved her sword to his side and he followed her. The metallic sound of their swords clashing again and again filled the room. He teleported behind her and cut through her armor. Then he went to hit her again. She fell to the ground rolling, avoiding the incoming hit. Her armor shined and the destroyed area was repaired. She was bleeding and he could see it at the floor. Several drops fell and she kneeled on the ground trying to stand up. He looked at her feeling a sort of pity, but no. No pity shall be given to an enemy, he thought. He would kill her and then proceed to God. He walked towards her and pointed his sword at her neck. She breathed heavily at the sight of his sword on her neck but she didn’t dare to look up. “Look at me.” He said. She did not move and inch. With his sword he brought her chin up. When she finally looked at him he slightly flinched at her look of anger directed towards him. They seemed far too familiar. His heart rate rose slightly and he swallowed hard. It wasn’t fear that hit him but a weird attraction. She remained looking at him like that for much longer than he wanted. “Stand up.” He mumbled. She did so with slow moves and he kept his sword at her chin. He tried to keep his face expression calm. “TITANIA!” Someone yelled across the room while being beside the door. Jace looked at him and grabbed the Archangel in a hostage position with his sword on her neck. She glared at him but did not speak. “Do one move and I cut her neck.” He yelled at the man who seemed to be looking for her. “Don’t hurt her. Please. ” He replied back seeming scared for her. Jace looked at him. He was really old but his eyes had the same grey shade as the Archangel’s. “She is all I have left..” the old man slowly reached for Titania. Jace tightened his sword on her neck and she grimaced . “I said don’t move.” The old man stopped. Jace gave a quick look around. God wasn’t here. They knew he was coming here after all. But if she is an Archangel it means she is important. She could be the perfect lure. He looked at the man who looked at him in shock. “I will be taking her.” He opened a portal with one of his fingers. “No! Wait!” Started the old man. Jace leaped into the portal with the Archangel. ~ Giratina
Posted on: Sun, 15 Sep 2013 21:15:43 +0000
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