BÀI TẬP CHỮA LỖI Các bạn cùng giúp anh Tùng - thành viên tích cực của lớp IELTS 01 sửa lỗi bài viết của anh ý về chủ đề playing video games nhé Tiêu chí: Tìm ra lỗi cho người khác chính là cách hiệu quả để chúng ta tránh lỗi trong bài viết của mình. Soi nhiệt tình nhé các bạn.... Topic 1: Playing video games has negative effects on players. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowaday, playing video games is a heated issue. Some people think that this problem may lead to negative effects while others claim that video game players can get positive effects on players. I strongly agree with former view for the following reasons. On the one hand, playing video games can affect negatively on players’ health that is extremely dangerous. Some people play video games everyday even overnight ; as a result, they can be lost sleep or short-sighted. This will be conductive to poorer players’ health after that. My brother, for instance, had to go to the hospital after he had played video games from the morning to the evening and overnight at a game shop near home. He had to treat in many days in the hospital and his parents worried so much. On the other hand, video games players can waste much money and time of their family and themselft. Firstly, to play the video games, they have to buy some game cards which make them losed much money. And if they are children or teenagers such as pupils and students who do not earn money at the moment, it will waste the money of their family. Secondly, some people who play games everyday, will waste much time. They will not have enough time for learning or working. Finally, when the players do not have enough money that can cause higher rate of crimes in many areas. This will affect negatively on our society. In conclusion, I greatly advocate attitude to playing video games make the players affected negatively.
Posted on: Wed, 06 Aug 2014 16:05:42 +0000
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