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GLORY! -- Feedback from my 1700 word Multicultural essay---> 25 Points out of 25 Points earned! Charna: this is a solid piece of writing, and one on which it is not easy to earn all of the points. YOU HAVE A GOOD INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH THAT PUTS THE ISSUE INTO A BROADER CONTEXT AND THEN YOU PRESENT A CLEAR THESIS WHICH YOU PROCEED TO DEVELOP AND SUPPORT. YOU HAVE USED ELEMENTS OF STYLE IN THE STORIES AS WAYS TO SHOW AUTHORS THEMES AND THEN USED THOSE THEMES TO SUPPORT YOUR THESIS. ALL OF THIS IS WELL DONE AND OBVIOUSLY TOOK SOME MATURE ANALYSIS ON YOUR PART -- NICE WORK! - WOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOO! And to think...I was struggling trying to pull it together!!!
Posted on: Thu, 24 Jul 2014 11:19:50 +0000

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