I wanna see where we can go with this idea. I think im gonna call - TopicsExpress



          

I wanna see where we can go with this idea. I think im gonna call it "The Miner". probably put a stanza or two in the middle. message me criticisms! Thanks! Mountains lined with solely gold, miners rush the stone. Treasures turning commonplace, erred desires grow Craving countless bullion, clay bricks! Swollen in silver vaults, a heart pursuing rarity Now faults, fissures sinking in Seizing ever finer iron gems, garments Gravel and grey, diamonds squandered futilely Men pray, “Give me all but you” This wanting will does not relent With no regard, the thief broke in Dark moth and rust too swiftly came Ill vermin had so briskly slain the hope In vain of the maker This Severance settles in, yields sin! A toll wagered by blood, a heart perfected aptly Did come, a mark of God’s own son Luring every faring eye to dwell, deeply Death to dust, Lord breathed in us intimately I pray, “take my all anew” His spirit crests with violent rage For all lost Hope, our King’s remade Our conquered freedom has been found True Love now has forever bound his grace Falls down on man Valleys laced with souls of gold, The Miner melts the stone Heaven coming commonplace, fervent passions flow
Posted on: Fri, 21 Jun 2013 07:58:01 +0000

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