Need an editors eye. Tweaking my blurb slightly at the recommendation of a reviewer. Heres what I have so far. The original blurb is up at mjv for comparison. You know you’ve had a bad day when you are chased by a psychopath and his army of secret agents, tormented by the monsters of your nightmares, and your imaginary Elf girlfriend won’t stop whispering from the shadows. All he wanted was a little peace and solitude while he cracked into super-secret government servers as he searched for his missing parents. Steven Crow – target of violent secret agents and monsters alike for reasons he can’t remotely comprehend, loved by an Elf of his imagination who may not be what she appeared to be, and going silently mad as he seeks answers to who he is, why he’s being pursued, and why his parents are missing.
Posted on: Sat, 20 Sep 2014 23:57:03 +0000
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