Ok ok here is what I wrote so far please comment on it and be honest if you like it. Okay this story starts off In a far off land on earth of course there is a family about to give birth to a young boy the mother gives birth and raises him till he is about two years old when some sort of hole appears out of no where and sucks the young boy in its gaping hole than it just disappears with out a trace but the crying of the parents for the loss of there son. The family was no ordinary family in fact they where vampires that hide away in the forest of vanderben witch was a small society of vampires. Now once the young boy got sucked through he woke up in some other world it was strange to him so he got up and started too walk when he saw some people they rushed towards him and picked him up and took him to there cave where they noticed that he had vampire teeth when they saw those teeth the elder of the cave said to kill him because he is an un holy beast And must be killed by a wild creature called the abagoochies so they take the boy and put him in the territory of the creature when they set the boy there they left as quickly as they could while the boy was asleep. The boy wakes up and finds him self alone and then starts to cry suddenly a creature comes out of the woods and runs towards the boy when a man jumps in front of the boy and kills the creature and takes the boy back to the cave and demands too let the boy stay with him and his family so the elders went to back of the cave and talked it over and said as long as you keep him out of the cave and keep him in your tree house. So the man rushed to his wife while holding the young boy and told her that the elders said it would be alright to keep this young boy as long as he stays away from the cave. The wife was so over joyed she went to her guest room and took the boy in and put him to sleep. Mean while back at the parents who lost there son they just began there life all over and gave birth to a boy two years later. 14 years later Steven has collected all the Information that he could to find his older brother and so he finally found out what caused the rip between the worlds. Mean while Zach Stevens older brother is much older has learned to hunt and care for himself that when he figures out that he is different from the other people and sets out too find out where he came from so he leaves his adopted parents and sets out on a journey. Not long after he left the village a miniature abagoochie the size of a dog runs at Zach and starts to attack him so Zach teeth start to grow and become more visible and so he bites the abagoochie and sucks its blood and than the creature runs of but Zach starts to feel week so he faints and than wakes up in a den full of bones and gets up and finds that abagoochie but this time its friendly and Zach realizes that when he sucked its blood it some how made the creature less aggressive. So he starts to train it to come when its called and to guard while he slept. So the next morning Zach gets up and continues on his journey and finds a stone wall that was not natural nor man made and sees writing on it so he gets som berries and a feather and starts to write on a scroll he brought with him and so he decides to head back to the village where he was raised and ask the elder about this writing he found. When he gets to the village people start screaming and running to get there guns and Zach calms them down and says that his pet was friendly so they all calm down and walk away. So Zach gets to the cave of the elders and shows them the writings he found on a stone wall and the elders said that is where we found you when you where young before you where by the wall a hole opened up and you fell right out and it closed right back up and disappeared.
Posted on: Tue, 26 Nov 2013 04:35:53 +0000
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