This is a dream sequence in the book Im working on for NaNoWriMo. What do you think? Is it confusing to you, the reader. Its supposed to be somewhat confusing for my character. I just dont want it to be for my readers. Let me know what you think. Calyns dreams consisted of bursts of confusing colors and muted sounds that made no sense. A fleeting touch of something dark and cold invaded her dream world, but Calyn managed to push it aside. A beautiful woman’s face looked down on her. The woman’s lips moved, but Calyn couldn’t hear her voice. As she fell deeper into her dreams, the woman vanished and Calyn saw her father sitting in front of the fireplace in the great hall, sobbing as the cries of a baby wailed in the background. Without warning, she slipped into the flames in the fireplace, and in the next instant, she stood amongst men, fighting on a field full of fire. Some wore the regular battle armor and standards of the king. The others wore odd, leather armor. As she stood there, a man ran at her with his sword drawn, but he passed right through her. She turned to see who the man was but the dream changed, again. Now, she stood in a room of polished, black granite. An exquisite, handsome man faced her, dressed in only a black silk robe which lay open across a coppery, muscled chest. His brown, gold-flecked eyes, gazed on her with an almost unquenchable hunger. Calyn felt a strange fire rise in her as he stepped forward, almost touching her body with his. He hooked her chin with a finger and leaned down to kiss her. The smell of lavender oil and leather filled her nostrils. The moment their lips met, the dream disappeared. Calyn woke with a start. The scent of lavender and leather lingered.
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