CAN SOME OF YOU COMMENT ON WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS THAT I WROTE PLEASE I NEED SOME FEED BACK.. How to let the feelings flow like water flowing off a mountain If I would let myself tell you what it feels like as I flow down the mountain side Picking up pace becoming wider stronger the sounds of rage that roar as I stride on. Thunderous slamming hitting those beautiful rocks making them smooth with ever tumble Feeling myself grasp a hold of mother earths wonderful massive trees tearing the roots Right from beneath them as if there soul was being ripped away from their bodies. Whisking them into me pushing them forward twisting turning pulling them under. Feeling my strength grow as I come to the point I must go over and down at what becomes Such a beautiful sight as I fall to my next journey flowing quietly smoothly till I hit the bottom With such a crash and force that waves become fierce as if I don’t fit as if I don’t belong but Once again becoming one racing forward full force with moments of rapids some so mild And some very angry pushing myself so hard against myself as I hit the water’s edge making Massive waves and swallows. I keep moving pushing forward till I become silent again yet Moving so fast yet no one sees all they see is that I am rolling on with a force that almost looks still. I keep rolling on like this till I hit the opens edge of what looks to be the rest of my life it’s so wide and open Full of life and happiness I finally become one with myself. by Bridget Jsmith
Posted on: Wed, 19 Jun 2013 01:44:43 +0000
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