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Review post for supernatural Story by: shnawaz khan Gud point in the story: 1. Supernatural story 2. Gud nd awesome story 3. Mindblowing plot 4. Gud to see radha and shyam . 5. gud combination of emotional, nd suspence part Dissappointment 1. Plz use catchy language. 2. Try to open the secret peacefully. Bht jaldbaji dikhai apne. 3. Climax was excellent bt it shud b awesome 4. Typing should b like script writing. My word of praise for it: Yar pdh k bht acha lga. Ek bar jb pdhna suru kiya to sare parts pdh dale. It was simply amazing. I wud jst say go on bhai. We are waiting for ur next story. My rating: 4/5 1 point deducted due to jaldbaji nd short post. Thank you
Posted on: Mon, 30 Jun 2014 15:03:12 +0000

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