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Hey guys! What do you want to do with our next chapter? for the group fanfic. I made this. (like 2 weeks ago but still havent continues it) And I feel like it is a piece of trash cause I cant make up the mood for the story. It is like deep and all T.T PLEASE TELL ME HOW YOU FEEL BOUT THIS Whether good or bad. P.S I forgot about our contest now I am really a trash! just throw me away T.T ------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 1 Maka’s P.O.V The room was filled with unbearable silent; you could hear the wind whistle and even the slightest noise would echo to the hall, every being that is present and had witnessed the scene is at the state of shock and stood like rocks. The situation is gullible, Excalibur being my Cupid? or Match Maker? This had to be a stupid joke! YOU WOULD BE MY WHAT?! I screamed, what was happening right now was so futile, I was red with rage and if looks could kill I swear this little white shaped umbrella human thingy is now 10 feet deep from the ground. “Fool! Did you not just hear what I said? I shall find you a mate!” he said while spinning his cane again and strutting around. Okay, now this is absurd! I was ready to tackle him once again but Kid is still holding onto me like an iron grip, but I was more shock when he had held me tighter and pressed my body to his. If I wasn’t tomato red from anger earlier, right now I can tell I am. I can hear my own heartbeat beating from my chest, like my heart is in my ear and as turn to him I heard a rip. “WHAT ON EARTH, HEAVENS AND HELL IS THE MEANING OF THIS?!” Soul screamed while he ripped the card into two then crunching it on his fist making his knuckles white. “YOU, LITTLE…. SWORD YOU!” “Fool! You had really proven you are indeed a Fool!” Excalibur said pointing the end of his crane at Soul’s face. “Whaaa-?! HEY DON’T CHANGE THE SUBJECT!” He said while grabbing him on this collar, you can clearly see the tick marks on his head and the flame surrounding his body, I was so engross with the scene I was slightly taken back when Kid had buried his head on the crock of my neck while holding me even tighter than before. I could feel myself getting redder by the second, it almost feels like he doesn’t want to let go of me. “Let go of me you fool!” Excalibur said as he hit Soul’s cranium with his crane. “I shall find the girl with the Grigori soul a perfect mate!” “AND WHO SAID THAT YOU CAN DO THAT?!” “YEAH! LIKE ANYONE WILL LIKE MISS TINY-TITS!” Blackstar said out of nowhere while pointing a finger at me and as on cue everyone had regained their senses ad out at the direction of his finger. At that moment I swear, I never seen Soul’s and Blackstar’s jaw reaching the ground , the twin pistol having a grin that promises they know something and they are planning on something, Tsubaki almost fainting and Excalibur just staring at us and seems…. Satisfied? At first I was curious why they are staring at me like I was some lunatic or something then I quickly remembered the position of me and Kid, his slender muscular arms wrap around me on a tight grip, head buried on the crock of my neck, that is also when I notice that my hands… my hands are on top of his and I was just standing here like I enjoy it! Cut the crap, You know you like it Maka! My subconscious said Okay! Alright I like it, Happy? I said Yes! Very. I can feel my subconscious smile with triumph. But that doesn’t change the position I am in right now. It seems like I’m the only one who can feel their eyes boring through us. “WHAT THE… WHAT ARE YOU DOING KID?!” In an instant Kid shoot his head up, his face suddenly wants to compete with the redness of my face, he quickly lets go and almost stumbled. “I-I… I was just---” “He was just holding me up Soul so I won’t Maka-Chop the brains out of someone.” I covered for him while glaring at Excalibur. “Fool!” He quickly counter, “You cannot kill me for thee I am thee holy sword and my legend started at the 12th century—“ “WE DON’T CARE ABOUT THAT!” Blackstar interrupted him. “FOOL! You just cannot handle the greatness I behold” Excalibur said as he started to strut again. “WHAT?! HOW DARE MOCK A GOD! I WILL SHOW YOU THAT I AM GREATER THAT YOU! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” “Fool! Those who speak nothing but air cannot accomplish anything!” “WHAT?! I DO NOT SPEAK AIR!” I giggled at this, which also surprising since the gang had also laughed as well while Blackstar was staring at us silently asking what is funny. But before I could speak, Excalibur had made its way to me and said. “You, Young Lady shall be guided by me to find your perfect mate!” Kid’s P.O.V I honestly didn’t know what happened to me, at first when I saw that card I was filled with emotions, so much emotions that my mind almost went blank. First I felt annoyed, annoyed that who in the right mind would ever think of taking her away from me, and ruined her symmetry! then I was relief, relief to find out that it was just only Excalibur and he might just puling a prank or something. But when he said he would find Maka a mate, I felt that my knees had lost it strength, body became numb and it seems like I can’t hear anything. I got a glimpse of Maka about to tackle Excalibur again which lends me to hold her even more, I know it was out of character but I somehow can feel my own reaction, my eyes are wide from shock and fear, my body becoming weak and emotions are uncertain. I lowered my head to the crock of her neck; I need to feel her, hold her, and be with her. My mind is running wild, each thought only consist of her with another man and how it would stab me at my heart and very soul. A Mate, Maka’s Mate….. These are the words that keep on repeating, playing and torturing me. There are times I would think of Maka being with someone else and how I felt the pain inside of me is still a question not answered. A lover may have the possibility of spending the last breath with the person dear to the owner, but a Mate is different. A Mate is considered something sacred especially to us immortals. The Mate can spend eternity with the other and die at the same time as the other leaves the earth, a bound with a Mate is unbreakable even if death is at its very neck, a Mate…. a Mate…. a Mate is the other person’s half since the day both of the souls are created, and once gone and given rebirth the two are still intertwined and at the very moment of first connection neglecting the years that may have past, the Mate shall know its half thus the their souls shall intertwined once again proclaiming each other as their own. I pulled her closer, as if not wanting to let her go, No… I don’t want to let her go, after all the years I have waited, am I going to give it away? No. My mind is clouded with confusion, I honestly don’t know what to do, as if my instincts are telling me to take her away. I was trying to calm myself but failed miserably until I felt her relax under my arms and her hands touching mine. I felt myself smiling at this as I secretly inhaled her scent, Heaven, she smelled like heaven for me, though I had never been to it before, but with her... I have. “WHAT THE… WHAT ARE YOU DOING KID?!” I heard Soul shout, and with that I quickly let go of her, shock at my own actions. I was trying to form words, never in my life I thought I would be stuttering but Maka had covered up for me and I was grateful for that. “You, Young Lady shall be guided by me to find your perfect mate!” Excalibur said to her, and once again I felt like my world is crumbling down. “Excalibur, Why are you doing this?” I asked, with my voice monotone. “Because the Angel needs to find her mate.” He answered while walking back and forth.
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