So Kelli-an sent us an email saying essential it is still crap and that we need to re-do the whole Pamphlet. Check out the email but she wrote this: It is far better to create a GREAT product a bit late, than a substandard, error-ridden product on time. So, keep at it! (It might also help to concentrate more on the content than the layout at this point). ORIGINAL FEEDBACK THAT STILL NEEDS TO BE ADDRESSED (1) The pamphlet is STILL speaking to “too many” audiences. I advised Brodie how to fix that. Talk to her. (2) Some of the technical information – e.g., authors, references, supports – STILL has far too much prominence. These need to be seriously minimized (or even eliminated). I advised Brodie how to fix that. Talk to her. (3) My feedback stated: I want you to return to a layout in which THE 3 INSIDE PANELS represent the 3 coping strategies. You STILL need to get the right content placed on the 3 INSIDE panels. PLUS (4) Seriously proof-read the pamphlet. (5) Generate well-organized, clearly-stated, accurate, complete content. I dont know what the references she is referring to, I dont know how we can include all the info about each technique, I dont understand how we are talking to multiple audiences so please help me out because I dont get it.
Posted on: Mon, 19 Jan 2015 01:04:54 +0000
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