This is a story i just wrote. Please read comment like share or give me your feedback on it please. The boy was everything he always wanted to be. He was happy. Enjoying life. The boy had his family his job his home everything he ever wanted. He stop cutting he was out of depression. His mum was proud. One morning he woke up and insted of going for a shower like he normal does he looked at his reflection he saw himself happy the guy he became. As he left the house for training he said goodbye to his family with a smile and his brothers and sister always said a smart comment back. The boy put his ear phones in put his music on and started walking. As he was walking he took a short cut but what he didnt know a guy from behind him was calling out to him. His music was to loud. The guy ran upto him and stabbed him in the back twice. The boy reached out for something to grab or hold but nothing he fell to the ground as a tear fell from his face. The guy ho stabbed him laughed as he fell and stabbed him once more before taking his stuff and running off. The boy was bleeding he started to have trouble breathing. After trying to breath he got up and stumbled his way home. He was down the road from his.house and he fell he couldnt go no more. He yelled out for help hopping his family could hear him. His brother herd him and rushed to him. He picked him up and ran to there house the brother yelling out to his family for help. The family took the boy to the hospital. The boy blacked out till he got to the hospital. The boy opened his eyes little. His machine started going off he Was dying then and there. His family were talking to him crying telling him it isnt his time to go. As the boy looked at his family they started to vanish into thin air. First his brother, then his sister,then his younder brother, his mum, his dad, then his nan they all vanished. The boy was seeing the light. He passed away. As he died. He woke up to his life. It was all just a dream he always wanted to happen. He woke up and looked at his reflection he saw the tears in his eyes. The cuts on his body. The story he needs to tell. But he saw the boy he needed to become to overcome. He closed his eyes and he saw his nan and his brother talking to him. Trying to give him a sign to go in life. He herd them say "we will always love you and we will always be a memory away to think about. Were looking out for you" the had a tear down his face. He fell to his knees and asked. "Why me? Why isnt it getting better? Im trying but why me? Im not getting anywhere. Please someone help me please" he begged on his knees to himself. He stood up and closed his eyes he felt a a hand on his shoulda he opend his eyes and saw his nan in the reflection. Feeling her touch once more. A tear fell. He blinked the sun was shining on the door and his brother and nan were walking through it. He yelled out "Is this a sign? Please" they replied " You will find the path just dont go looking for it take your time and it will come to you. Never give up your faith. We are here" His nan and brother walked through the door. The boy begged them to stay but it was time for them to go. He cried and cried till he got off his knees and looked at himself and told himself "Everything will be okay just dont look back" He turned around walking towards the door. He never looked back... MADE BY #MR FRESHIE
Posted on: Tue, 20 Aug 2013 10:23:17 +0000
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